Good And Bad Essay Coherence

Let’s talk about coherence now this paragraph came from an essay about whether the government should invest in public transportation okay now this was sent to me by my friend Adriano from Brazil and he was very gracious and let me use this for the lesson what I want to show you here is that although he has good ideas the coherence doesn’t really exist because he’s trying to put too many ideas into this paragraph it’s very important to remember one paragraph has one central focus and that central focus should be made very clear in the topic sentence so first let’s read the paragraph to begin with enhancing the quality of public transportation should be mandatory for any government especially in countries dealing with mobility issues owning a car is unaffordable for many people leading most citizens to depend daily on public transportation. Find out how to make your essay more coherent on Robotdon.

Seemingly some governments acknowledge that if they had a good public transportation system they would be more likely to attract international investments and boost their economy altogether a good public transportation service will make people spend less money use cars less often and cause less damage to the environment by decreasing the level of pollution okay all good ideas but none of them connect one to the other okay topic sentence is about enhancing public transportation and government duty or obligation to do this next paragraph is about people owning cars and not being able to afford owning cars and depending on public transportation next one is about investment for an investment the next one after that and the economy the next one after that is about the environment so I have too many ideas and I don’t know what this paragraph is about okay so I broke it down for you a little bit more let me just move out of the way here there is a paragraph on the side topic sentence enhancing quality mandatory governments next sentence owning a car good idea but not like it’s not linked to the government’s duty.

I have no idea what the government has to do with people affording cars or not or depending on public transportation or not the next sentence talks about other transportation leading to a good economy okay but how how does it do this what does the government have to do with this in terms of making having an obligation to create more public transportation how will this bring in foreign investors I don’t know what’s the connection to people affording their cars I don’t know now in terms of cohesion he started a sentence with seemingly some governments acknowledged as soon as he uses the word acknowledge then the word seemingly doesn’t work seemingly means it seems that if it seems that means it appears to be but not necessarily is but if it’s acknowledged then it is the word seemingly doesn’t work here okay and it’s just basically he’s trying to force in a transition word but it doesn’t actually work and especially since it’s contradicted by the word acknowledge last sentence better public transportation people spending less healthier environment.

Thesis And Opinion Statements

The part of the thesis statement is to think about the antithesis the antithesis is the opposite point of view from what you are proposing and it’s often a phrase in your thesis statement that begins with although let’s have a look at an example you might think one of the opposite points of view for why stricter speed limit should be introduced well perhaps it’s costly it’s difficult to monitor to enforce so these are the elements that are going to go into your although phrase so you might come up with something like this although enforcing lower highways speed limits is difficult and costly lower highways speed limits are needed because they save lives and protect the environment and that is an example of a complete thesis statement that you could come up with you can see that it has all three parts.

An opinion statement the elements of support and an emphasis let’s have a look at another example here you can see the three elements of a thesis statement very clearly although primary school language programs are expensive to do maintain foreign language education is important because it aids cognitive development and ultimately contributes to global understanding now in this thesis statement we can clearly see that the opinion is that foreign language education is important the elements of supportive and cognitive development and it contributes to global understanding and the antithesis is that these programs are expensive to develop and to maintain so let’s practice writing a thesis statement let’s ask the question should school leavers do some form of national service when they leave school firstly think what is your opinion yes or no then one of the elements of support you can give to support your position and finally what are the counter arguments to your opinion here’s an example of a thesis statement to answer this question all those civil liberties groups maintain their national services of containment of freedoms and civil rights national service is necessary in New Zealand because it teaches young people’s self-discipline and allows them to make a positive contribution to the growth of the country now if you have the opposite point of view.

The thesis statement could easily be twisted and here we have the example although some people believe that national service teaches them people’s self-discipline and allows them to make a contribution to the growth of the country national service is not desirable in New Zealand because it curtails freedoms and violates the civil rights of citizens okay so now we know how to construct a thesis statement and we can move on to step four of writing do you say and that is to think about the organization the three main points of an essay are the introduction the body and the conclusion now in the introduction there should be three things happening first thing you need to set up the general context of your topic you may wish to give background information about the topic or you may wish to explain the topic significance you might ask intriguing questions to get your reader involved.

Academic Essay Quality

You have to understand that academic writing is a very broad notion and you can write athletes as part of your test assignments for to Apple for example you can write essays at school but dynamic writing usually concerns college and university and writing for your majors doing research and reporting on it so I’m going to introduce myself I’m a master of linguistics and I have written more than 600 X’s and that is not only during my education I have written that for students asking for my help and I have tutored more than 200 students on how to write their asses I have created my own project to make it stand as the writing assistance and you’re probably familiar with it wearing care writing tips larry provides services of proofreading and editing where i provide reviews of the sources so that students can use them inside them in their asses and i have an ask me page where you can ask a question and receive the quality answer to that. Develop your skills with our help on Edusson.

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Vannesa Quality Management and Productivity/MGT 449 September 13 Total Quality Pioneers In this paper, quality and elements will be defined, a description on how the quality pioneer’s use of total quality elements made the pioneer successful, explanation on why the elements of quality are useful in today’s environment, and the foresee future of quality. Quality can mean different things depending on the industry being discussed. Quality can be defined as a dynamic state associated with products, services, people, processes, and environment that meets or exceeds expectations and helps produce superior value”(Goetsch&Davis,2010).


Elements important to an organization are vision, mission, objectives, customer focus, obsession with quality, commitment, continual improvement, education, and training. The elements assist organizations with creating a new foundation and maintaining a structure that may allow an organization to be successful if the elements are utilized and there is continual improvement. There are three well-known quality pioneers known for the use of total quality elements. The pioneers are W. Edwards Deming, Joseph M. Juran, and Philip B. Crosby. The United States and international countries did not warmly welcome Deming and the United States dismissed Deming as the United States believed there was little competition with international countries and his opinion was not needed. After World War II, Japan had to make a change from producing raw materials to producing consumer goods. This change put Japan up against other countries and Japan was not having much success with the new change. Japan contacted Deming for his expertise advice and was open to making the appropriate changes needed in order to be successful. The turn around for Japan was using Deming’s fourteen point structure. “The fourteen points summarize Deming’s views on what an organization must do to effect a positive transition from business as usual to world glass quality”(Goetsch&Davis,2010). Joseph M. Juran founded an institute named Juran Institute Inc which is an international leader in conducting training, research, and consulting activities in the area of quality management”(Goetsch&Davis, 2010). Juran is best known for his three basic steps to progress, ten steps to quality improvement, Pareto Principle, and the Juran trilogy. Juran advises organizations to focus their improvement by identifying and eliminating problems or sources of their problems. Philip B. Crosby is best known for his advocacy of zero defects management and prevention, quality vaccine and fourteen steps to quality improvement.

Crosby has a successful background in quality, formed Philip Crosby Associates, and then spent his time giving lectures on quality related issues. Many organizations have used the pioneer’s methods and have been able to turn around their organizations. Elements of quality are useful in today’s environment because the elements give organizations specific instructions and structure in order to be successful. If organizations are willing to follow basic steps, Jurans ten step, or Deming’s fourteen steps, then an organization has a good chance at turning their current situation around and becoming successful. Quality’s future will continue as long as competition exists. Organizations will continue to utilize the three pioneer’s elements in order to maintain structure, provide quality product and service. Organizations must have a strong, clear plan set in place, and have the organizations full commitment in order to be successful. The changes cannot happen over night and organizations will need to be patient and allow the changes to take its course.

The three pioneers W. Edwards Deming, Joseph M. Juran, and Philip B. Crosby have proven their total quality elements have assisted organizations in being successful. Many organizations continue to use their methods to keep their organization structured. References Goetsch, D; Davis, S. (2010). Quality Management for Organizational Excellence: Introduction to Total Quality, Sixth Edition. Published by Prentice Hall.


Paolo Freire, a Brazilian radical educator talks about the oppression students face in the traditional method of learning, The Banking Concept of Education. According to him in this method of teaching “the contents, whether values or empirical dimensions of reality, tend, in the process of being narrated, to become lifeless and petrified. ” He accuses education to be suffering from “narration sickness” where students learn the content distancing it from reality in a very mechanical way.


Therefore he proposes a Problem-Posing method of education where the students while learning from the teacher are themselves educating the teacher through constant communication. Regarding “dialogue as indispensable to the act of cognition which unveils reality”, the problem-posing method of education thrives on understanding and creativity resulting in critical reflection and then intervention by students who should then go on to transform the lives of people in the world. As revolutionary as the problem-posing method may sound in this article, I have mixed feelings about this whole issue as conventional wisdom has it that the Banking Concept of Education enables more content to enter the minds of students making them more knowledgeable about the topic being taught and sometimes the subject matter itself does not allow ways for effective problem-posing. I can now vividly recall my experience in my Business Studies class during junior high school year and look at it through a different perspective. The pedagogy in that class was very similar to what Freire would describe as “The Banking Concept of Education” where we as students were meant to absorb as much as we could from what was being poured onto us by the teacher, just like sponges. As per the syllabus from Edexcel U. K our course was required to “produce students who have a sound understanding of business and who have the ability to use knowledge, skills and understanding appropriately in the context of international markets and the United Kingdom. ”-Edexcel International. What I experienced and learnt from that class was totally different though.

Our teacher, a “well-educated” man in his fifties, would come to class with pages of printed lecture notes and distribute them to all the students at the beginning of each class. He would then start narrating the notes in his own words and would act, according to Freire’s words, as a depositor. We, as students, were mere objects in his class trying to patiently receive, memorize, and when necessary repeat what was deposited in us. We were primarily not “called upon to know, but to memorize the contents narrated by the teacher”. The more we stored and reproduced “facts” the less we developed our ability to learn through critical reflection, the method of authentic learning. There was very little or no true communication in class in terms of facilitating questions from students about various topics in the course. One such example was when one student in my class asked him “Why would a country increase or decrease its foreign currency exchange rates? ”, his reply was “You are not required to know that according to your business studies syllabus, so don’t bother. Although our teacher was true his complete lack of respect for the student’s keenness to acquire some relevant additional knowledge baffled me. He had already chosen the program content and made up his mind as to what was and what wasn’t “necessary”. We as students did not have any say in it and had to accept his way of teaching, otherwise we would be “misfits” in the education system.

Feature (h) of the banking concept reads “the teacher chooses the program content, and the students (who were not consulted) adapt to it. This just sums up that saddening incident during our class. Freire also states that “any situation in which some individuals prevent others from engaging in the process of inquiry is one of violence. ” The fact that he did not enable us to learn through inquiry was an act of violence regardless of the means he used for it. He denied us of the basic right of dialog and communication. This raises questions about our status as human beings, for the fact that communication with others and our own decision making is what distinguishes us from mere objects surviving on Earth. On a different note, although we were conscious of what was being taught to us, we were never encouraged to be conscious of consciousness. In other words we would not contemplate on the authenticity of what was entering our conscience. I learned that increasing interest rates would cause inflation to reduce but was never able to discuss why and how it occurs or whether it occurs at all. Thus I was forced to look at the world from what was being taught to me, my teacher’s and the textbook’s fragmented viewpoint of reality, which took away my ability to think for my own self. Problem posing in class was thought of as challenging the teacher’s knowledge and qualifications to teach the subject. A questioning or problem-posing student was considered rebellious or arrogant. Therefore in the name of the “preservation of culture and knowledge we have a system which achieves neither true knowledge nor true culture”.

We accepted this fact and moved on to be just automatons during the length of the course. We were taught everything with only one purpose in mind – score exemplary marks in the public examination set by Edexcel. All the course content, questions for “discussion” in class were focused on getting all the “knowledge” we needed to score an A in the final public exam. Business Studies as a subject of learning the functioning of enterprises in the “real world” was not what we did seem to study. We learned all the definitions, advantages and disadvantages of certain decisions and how to answer each type of question in black and white. No places for inquisitive learning, discussion, grey areas, nothing. The more passively we learned the better “fits” we became to the class and the smarter we were deemed to be as questioning would mean we hadn’t grasped the subject with success. We could never come up with authentic thoughts of our own as critical reflection was minimal. The subject matter though stimulating was never the topic of a debate or discussion thus its attachment to reality was distanced through our learning. According to Freire true “knowledge emerges only through invention and reinvention, through the restless, impatient, continuing, hopeful, inquiry human beings pursue in the world, with the world, and with each other. This is what stimulates authentic reflection which enables us to understand “people in their relations with the world” We were forced to look at the subject removed from its real-life existence as if it were an extinct species and we were trying to recollect as many facts about it as possible.

This according to me distorts the true purpose of education which is to be knowledgeable about something and be able to put it into practice, which would then enhance the lives of fellow human beings. Freire calls this praxis, the actions through which true liberation is achieved. Freire refers to true liberation as the transformation of the world through the actions of men and women who reject communiques and embody communication. In other words through interaction and discussion with people a solution which is of greater benefit to people at large is found which when implemented enhances the lives of the people. It acknowledges the world to be dynamic and needing constant transformation and not one which is static in nature. On this note had we had a class which would have facilitated problem posing, we would have attached the subject content to the real world thus enabling us a better understanding of the material. In my opinion a great drawback of the banking concept of education is that once the exams or quizzes are over most of the course content is forgotten since everything was stored in your head with the sole purpose of spitting it out for the exams. Due to its detachment from reality the course content is insignificant in our lives. As the exams are over our “containers” are emptied and ready to be filled by new material needed for the next session of regurgitating. In hindsight however,

I feel that our teacher was not really left with many other ways to educate us on the subject. Many people regard that an interactive class would make understanding of the subject content easier, however teaching a class of thirty five, had he facilitated questions from the students and enabled discussions it would have taken forever to complete the syllabus. Quite frankly, at the end of the day getting good grades at the exams was of utmost priority. Although we are told standardized tests are not true reflections of a person’s intelligence or knowledge its results are considered significant and life-changing, how ironic. So this is a key reason for the survival of the banking concept of education. Speaking honestly, most of us wouldn’t mind getting an A and not knowing anything about the true reality of the material than fail the course and know how it relates to the world and the people. That is how deep the importance of letter grades is inculcated into our systems. Furthermore some of the course content required it to be taught in such a way. For example it would have been interesting to discuss the possibility to regard all currencies as equal in value, but in truth it is not. Such a debate would not only have wasted time but could have caused confusion and distorted the facts about exchange rates. In a system where syllabuses are required to be followed and deadlines need to be met, effective management of time is of utmost importance. On another note this could have caused some students to get a false perception about the topic too, distorting reality, thus it was better for our teacher to dictate the facts and for us to follow. Therefore we can say that both methods of education have their sets of pros and cons. On the one hand the teaching of facts in black and white is beneficial as it avoids confusion and in most cases it actually is in plain black or white although we would like to think otherwise. This method enables more content to be absorbed by the students making their knowledge bases wider and enable them to score better grades. On the other hand problem-posing education tries to attach reality to the content being learned which enables us to recall the content better, even after exams are over. According to Freire it also enables us to solve the problems people face with the world which truly liberates us as humans since we acknowledge that humans and the world co-exist. When looking back at the article written by Freire, he himself is contradicting his own teachings through the tone of his article. While he believes that learning through the problem-posing method is revolutionary due to its significant contributions towards mankind, his complete disregard for the obvious benefits of the banking concept of education convinces me that he is contradicting his own thoughts about education.

For example the paragraph on page 252 “Once again, the two educational concepts and practices…banking education resists dialogue…banking education treats students as objects…banking concept inhibits creativity…historicity as their starting point. ” bombards the banking concept and praises the problem-posing method. By doing this Freire is trying, although unsuccessfully, to convince the reader to endorse his way of thinking…this makes us question his actions as he is forcefully trying to fill our conscience without any regard to us being “conscious of consciousness”. This article as a whole makes me understand one thing – it is possible for both teaching methods to co-exist just like the world and humans. This could then result in the transformation of the lives of more students, rather than just the group who would like to learn interactively or the group who would like to learn narratively. It is common knowledge that different people like to learn differently as no two people would be the same, thus an optimum combination of both methods could be the most effective education system – one where facts are taught with relation to the world and whenever possible including discussion about ambiguous topics enabling students to have a fuller grasp of content and reality.

Or it could be a totally different pedagogy altogether but one thing is for sure – we cannot count on the banking concept alone nor the problem posing concept by itself to be the ideal method of teaching and learning in the modern world…

Homeschool Methods and Philosophies By Curriculum Choice

Homeschooling your child is a huge commitment of time and resources such as an essay writing service or other online platforms. Many parents do not feel disciplined enough to do it. But those that do find that the educational experience can bet better for their child. If you have been homeschooling your child for a while now, then the time has come for your child’s first exam or tests. You have been following the curriculum for the home school program as diligently as you can, but some of the suggested methods of homeschool curriculum review have not been particularly effective for your child. Thus, you would like some more effective ideas for homeschool curriculum review.

The first thing that you need to do when it comes to selecting the right homeschool curriculum review is to observe the teaching methods that have thus far worked best for your child. If you are homeschooling your child because you think he or she requires more specialized attention, then you should be sure to keep that in mind. Does this attention require you setting a lot of boundaries, or does your child benefit from have a more laid back learning environment?

If your child needs more rules and a very structured learning environment, then you will have to be a bit stricter with your homeschool curriculum review. It might be easy for your child to become distracted in their own home while learning, so it would be best if you conducted each lesson in certain area of the house that is free from any distractions. Some parents even convert a room in their home into a classroom.

Also, assign certain studying hours. Some children need this structure, otherwise they would never study at all! So, when it comes time for a homeschool curriculum review, be sure that your child studies or goes over the material on his or her own at least an hour a day prior to the exam. Of course, this time can be adjusted in accordance with the child’s age, as well as how easily the child has learned the material thus far.

If your child benefits from a less structured learning environment, if you live in an area where the weather is warm and nice most of the time, an idea is to teach the child outside in a designated area of the lawn. When it comes to home school curriculum review, a fun way for the child to review the material is to have various review games.

For example, if there is going to be a test on a foreign language, play a memory game in which half of the cards have a drawing of an object, and the other half have the word in the language that the child is learning. For more information on various homeschool review methods, search the internet, as there are a variety of websites with forums on which home schooling parents can share resources. You are sure to find the most effective review methods with the proper research.

A good curriculum review is essential to the success of your child (or why else would traditional education put so much emphasis on test scores?). With a good curriculum review, you can test your child to see what their strong points are and which areas need further review and study. One of the benefits of homeschooling is that your child can receive the individual attention that they need and you can concentrate on problem areas of study to help your child succeed.

Are Your Ready looking for an Online Bachelor Measure

Getting a bachelor’s or master’s position may appear an insurmountable impediment when you’re working a 40-hour week. But assorted Americans who suffer from work, dearest and fiscal obligations that safeguard them from quitting their jobs to escort a time-honored college or university sated lifetime from succeeded in judgment an up to date way to link up their education goals and forward movement their careers.

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Called distance learning, it’s an approach that’s taking the mountains — and especially the Internet — by means of storm. Dozens of accredited colleges and universities instant put forward online bachelor situation programs that order students to spend toy or no time on campus. In most cases, you can learn to win from the comfort of your own home.

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The nation’s largest accredited retiring university, the University of Phoenix, is an a-ok case of the trend toward detachment learning Research Paper. It offers online bachelor standing programs in business, technology, healthfulness care, teaching, and social and behavioral science. At the inception of 2002, the matrix year for the benefit of which figures are at one’s disposal on the Unit of Upbringing website, the University of Phoenix had more than 107,000 students enrolled in programs offered in classrooms and via the Internet through the nursery school’s online campus.

While getting an almost imperceptibly a rather from an accredited online university like the University of Phoenix can substantially raise your lifetime earning profile, online learning isn’t for everyone. Online learners do first-class when they’re much motivated, are qualified to learn to face a routine classroom mise en scene, and have cogent computer skills and their own living quarters computer.

If you fit this gain, here’s a primary checklist you’ll need to review before choosing an online situation program:

– Do you chance on the ivory-tower requirements?

Like a traditional brick-and-mortar college, online universities from induction requirements that may restyle according to your line of study. Certificate and online bachelor gradually programs will insist an intoxication way of life diploma or GED certificate. Entrance requirements as a service to graduate degrees desire veer with the online standing program. At the University of Phoenix, for the specimen, most graduate degree programs order a minimum of three years of related to one’s daily dozen experience and a bachelor’s caste with a 2.5 GPA or higher.

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Accreditation is a prepare that colleges and universities submit to without being prompted in order to receive their credentials. Because there are no national accrediting standards, you should research your inculcate credentials and accrediting association. The U.S. Department of Tutoring or the Commission on Acceptance of Postsecondary Accreditation recognizes six regional and thither 80 authoritative accrediting associations in the Coordinated States. The University of Phoenix, for example, is accredited by way of the Commission on Institutions of Higher Education of the North Significant Confederation of Colleges and Schools.

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Take some era to scrutiny your options from the essence of the panorama of your own goals. To conclude which secondary best fits your academic vignette and educational goals, blue ribbon directory your criteria. Then, estimate online grade programs based on their accreditation, features, and expenses. Post-haste you are enduring chosen several schools that quicken you, stop in their websites destined for more information. All online universities stipulate emancipate, thorough information takes their limit programs and sprung online access to enrollment counselors. Beg middle school officials questions back such things as enrollment numbers, graduation regardless, faculty qualifications, and any confusing details about the application process or conjectural policies.

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If you’re taking into consideration an online bachelor degree, fix confident you can afford the costs as a service to schooling, books (if any), and other admin or online fees. Recognize, too, that you may not entertain to be enough the express cost of your online teaching alone. At the University of Phoenix, 59% of the University’s students take into one’s possession all or function of their tutelage from their employer. Regular if your employer won’t unexpectedly pay for owing the bring in of making you a ameliorate worker in all respects continuing education, there are in addition other economic options within reach, including federal, cede and lending programs with ill-bred weight rates.

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Education Writing Essay

Education thesis is the first thing you should include to your paper. It is an obligatory part of any essay or research. Why is it so important? Thesis statement plays an essential role in the whole writing. On the one hand, it helps you be concentrated on one major idea throughout the whole paper. On the other hand, it is a map of your writing for the reader. Here you indicate all the things you are going to discuss in the writing and try to catch the reader’s attention. In other words, a thesis statement is a hook to get the reader’s attention from the first paragraph of the paper.

How to write essay online? If you cannot answer this question you will not be able to create a splendid thesis statement. What to do in this case? Go to the library and learn more about this part of writing. If you do not want to do this, there is a simpler way to get a splendid thesis statement – get in touch with our writers. This is a guarantee of success because they are pretty good at writing perfect essay.

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Your paper is half-written if you have an excellent thesis statement. Pay attention to these possible mistakes in order to create a winning thesis of your own;

  • The thesis statement is written with the help of very complicated terms
  • It is presented in a form of a question
  • The thesis is a long and complicated sentence; it is too difficult to understand it
  • There are a lot of grammatical and spelling mistakes in your thesis
  • It does not introduce the problem discussed in the writing
  • It is placed in the body of the paper or in its conclusion
  • The idea presented with the help of a thesis statement and one in the paper are different
  • There are two themes in the paper
  • A thesis statement consists just of one single phrase
  • It is too simple and presents no new information to the reader
  • It is not catching and involving the reader into the problem under consideration
  • It is about nothing and everything at the same time

So, try not to make the same mistakes in the thesis of your own. It is advisable to have several sample essays at hand in order to get an idea of what a thesis statement is and how to create it. You may prepare several drafts of your thesis statement and read them to someone. This will help you to choose the best thesis statement.

Some people recommend writing an education thesis when you have already completed the4 whole paper. But in this case, you have no idea to follow during the process of writing. That is why it is better to start a paper with your pithy thesis.

Typewriters? Shorthand? How Times Have Changed

A recent gift to the Bridgeport Public Library Historical Collections was this small wooden ruler, only six inches in length. The ruler had the name “Gutchess College” engraved on the side, with the address 46 to 54 Cannon Street.
What was Gutchess College?
The Bridgeport City directory for 1911 gives us the answer. S.D. Gutchess was the proprietor of the Gutchess College at 46 Cannon Street. The ad in the 1911 city directory says that Stephen D. Gutchess took over as the proprietor of the college from Brown’s Business College. Brown had started this school n 1896 teaching young men and women about the business trade.

Long before computers, instructors taught stenography, typewriting, telegraphy and bookkeeping. The school boasted that they filled “had 500 positions annually.” The 1911 city directory said that they had thirty typewriters at the school, and “up-to-date” instruction.
My how times have changed!

Martin Luther King in Bridgeport?

A question arises every year in Bridgeport. Did Martin Luther King visit Bridgeport?
On at least four occasions, Reverend Martin Luther King spoke to crowds in Bridgeport. The first time was in 1961 when the Reverend King was invited by the University of Bridgeport to give a lecture at Klein Auditorium.
More than 2,700 people attended the lecture.
In 1962, Reverend King spoke at Central High School in a program co-sponsored by the NAACP and the Interdenominational and Ministerial Alliance of Greater Bridgeport.
In early 1964, just months after President Kennedy’s assassination, King spoke again to a capacity crowd at Klein Auditorium.
King said, “I think that the greatest tribute Americans can pay to the memory of John F. Kennedy is to see the civil rights bill is passed just as Kennedy presented it.”
The Reverend Dr. Martin Luther King’s last visit was on March 13, 1966. He spoke to a large and racially mixed crowd at Klein Auditorium.
When the civil rights leader was assassinated in 1968 in Memphis, Tennessee, a local memorial service was held at Klein Auditorium. The audience overflowed out into the street.